High school

C’ya mum, I’m going to school now. I always hate the first day of school, all the new kids ride on their bikes on there first day and take up all the bike spaces at school, hope i don’t have to tie my bike up to the tree like last year! School starts in ten minutes and I’m about eleven minutes away so I will get my bike stuck on the tree.

Last year some-one stole my bike so I will have to spray paint my bike yellow! Life sucks!

2 thoughts on “High school”

  1. Lucas,
    Your piece made us have two emotions at the same time. We felt sad and humored. It was sad that the narrator was worried about needing to tie the bike to a tree, but the story also made us laugh. We thought it was a funny way to handle the prompt. Keep writing!
    Mrs. G., and Asher, Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Hi Lucas,
    I really enjoyed your story and it made me laugh to imagine having to tie up your bike AND paint it yellow in order to prevent it from being stolen!

    It would be great incentive for getting up a bit earlier to get to school before the other kids.

    Well done!

    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

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