The Big Coincidence.

16th, August, 2050.

I was walking down the street when I had seen a lit-up object fly through the sky! The flying object had crashed in a field, not far away! After sometime running, I had finally found the object, a man crawled out of the box. He said to him self,” Next time I will add a parachute.” “Who are you?” I exclaimed to the man. ” I am a time traveler fromĀ 2091! What year is it here?” He exclaimed.”2050!” I said.” Wait, is electricity still around?” He asked, “yes, now go back to 2091!”fine!” He cryed.

2 thoughts on “The Big Coincidence.”

  1. Hello Lucas,

    What a strange experience in your story. Someone from the future arrives and seems shocked to find electricity is still in use. I wonder what he uses in the future? Perhaps in your future adventure he returns and takes you with him. I wonder what you’d find?

    Keep writing and sharing.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. Hi Lucas – great job with your story!

    I like your use of the prompt and how you work it into your writing effortlessly.
    Using the future in stories is fascinating isn’t it?

    There are endless opportunities for storylines so if futuristic writing interests you really dive into it and pursue themes such as where does this man from future come from, what language does he speak and so on. This type of writing is a great chance to show your wild imagination. Plus, with that sort of writing you can bring your descriptive skills which you use so well in this story.

    Great job – keep on writing!

    Ed, Team100 WC
    Guernsey, Channel Islands.

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