The suspicious street!

It always looked suspicious.  Every morning as we ran by I longed to know its story. Who owned it? Do they still live here? Why has they’re fence gone? Well today I’m going to answer those questions. I get to the house and knock on the door and wait… No answer…Still no answer, so I go around the house and look through the broken glass, as I walk around the house, I see that everything is empty, so I keep on walking around the house. Then see something that changes everything, a sign that says, “For Sale?”

One thought on “The suspicious street!”

  1. Hi Lucas – great job!

    I love the mysteriousness of your story. Your use of rhetorical questions adds to the tension and brings the reader along with you. I also like your use of ellipses (i.e., …) because it slows down the flow of the story allowing the reader to savour suspense!

    Awesome job – keep on writing!

    Ed Team100 WC
    Guernsey, Channel Islands.

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